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You know, it's kind of ironic, school is indeed a place for learning with it's halls, yet what many of us may remember the most are the days of old where we'd play during recess hours, meeting with friends and experiencing memories many of us really are likely not quite going to forget. ...er, plus, with a cast this big I couldn't quite fit them all in a classroom. So, what's going on? Well... you can probably see what is occurring. As for what some of the characters are saying, well I'll let you decide! Also, I took this drawing as an opportunity for color. Finally, most of my cast appears in vivid colors! What do you think, do the schemes work for them? I also used some textures: the pavement and the sky that is. They are from photos that I personally took. Again, what do you think, does it work, or does it push the suspension if disbelief a tad bit too far? Anyway, that's that then. Hopefully you'll like it: I certainly feel satisfied! I'd love to hear your feedback, if you so desire! Comment as you will~ This whole picture, all of the characters and textures belong to Comments
This is a group shot and then some! Love all the different action going on here, most of it very humourous.
-- Boredom Breeds Creativity If music is the food of love, then silence is the seed of hate Awwwwww, that's brilliant!
-- "Seeing Criminoso's nipples is kind of inspiring, though XDD." ~ Mininem "Still, an ass is no place for kids." "If something's wrong with your brain, I hope it never gets fixed." ~IamDerek Nice layout!
-- ~"You should talk to God. He's a really nice guy!" *lol* That's because we're sisters!!!
-- ~"You should talk to God. He's a really nice guy!" |
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I love how all the characters interact with each other too. (I like the capt. in the back, it kind of looks like he's encouraging someone about to be catapulted, despite the fact the guy is a dog)
Anyways, critique!
There is a lot to see here, flow works out well in this on two levels, the upper half and the lower half.
In the upper half, my eyes follow whats going on from left to right well, however the person under the jungle gym destracts my sight a little before moving on to the other side of the picture
same with the bottom half, only it flows from the two sword fighting to the group playing Tic tac toe and back to Leo reading with the other cute character (I wish I can remember their names at the moment XD). Not that its a bad thing. Flow works out well there.
So far, everything looks good in this. You did a outstanding job on this and gets a
LOL! That is on overplayed tick-tack-toe game!~ and it looks like the girl penguin won twice! I think it was too much for her buddy to handle, haha. Seeing as how the sky is peachy red, one would think it'd be later in the evening when they were playing. I really like it though, it reminds me of after care, the recess played after school! I had to pick up my siblings from that late in the evenings after college classes.
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